After thoughts

So, as the title said this is going to be my thoughts about my project now that the jam is over.

The first thing I want to do is say sorry. Sorry that this story and vn in general were so low quality. And sorry for the people that went through my story to rate it for the jam.

Honestly I was surprised that there were some people that enjoyed this. That's not to say they have bad taste, they can just find the good parts and enjoy those. For example most people found the president's speech to be hilarious, especially the one line where he just sums up his speech in one sentence.

I'm probably being too pessimistic about it though, but it doesn't deter me from going back and fixing it. Which means I've been working on a re-write of the story. I focused on a couple of things that I was lacking in the story, such as the character building, how some things didn't flow well, and the death portion being preachy. I've re-worked some things and taken out some others. The story now seems much better to me and would probably be a more enjoyable read. I have to thank the lovely people that streamed and watched the stream of my vn in the discord for giving me their opinions and having a chaotic time reading it.

Also! Congrats to everyone that managed to submit something for the jam and another congrats for Erebus' Geiger for winning overall!

And for the people who followed me from my first vn, I just want to say i'm sorry about the radio silence. The second part of the story is complete and edited, but I want to read through my story multiple times all the way through and probably get some help from the discord before publishing it.

Hope everyone has a good day/night and I'll be updating this soon!